англ.яз.

девушки, добрый вечер. можно вас попросить пожалуйста проверить мой короткий текст. так не хочется позориться перед иностранцем.. пишу письмо.

My name is Anna and I’ll help you with the art exhibition in Moscow on May. We’ll may to choose the images from your on-line gallery.

Tomorrow morning I have to discuss pictures with Marina.
Regarding your visit, my colleges who make your travel support, ask you to find Visa Office in your country for apply Russia Visa. Also, could you please send us the copy passport (the main passport page) for the Visit Invitation and for booking.

узбекистонцы.

А можно текст по-русски сначала, чтобы точно понять, что именно имеется в виду? Или хотя бы описать "своими словами"?

Не претендую на истину, но я бы так написала.
Последний параграф Котенка.
Dear Имя,
My name is Anna and I am responsible for help in organizing an art exhibition in Moscow in May.
Primarily, we have to discuss with Marina and approve which of your works will be presented on the exhibition. For the beginning, we can choose the images from your on-line gallery.
My colleagues will support you regarding to your visit. Please find Russian consulate in your country to apply for Russian visa. Could you please send us a copy of your passport (the main passport page)? We need it to arrange a Visit Invitation and for a reservation (ticket reservation?).
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely –пишется, если в обращении указываете имя человека
Yours faithfully – если имя адресата неизвестно

Почитаешь этот ужас и тихо порадуешься ))
Как же все-таки я хорошо знаю английский! Девочки, учите языки, чтобы вот так на форумах не позориться) (Про иностранцев уж вообще молчу).

"my colleagues", "russian visa", " the copy of your passport".

Вы отослали уже? Вот правильный текст

My name is Anna and I will be helping you with the art exhibit in Moscow in May. We’ll be able to select the images from your online gallery. Tomorrow morning I will need to discuss the pictures with Marina.
Regarding your visit, my colleagues, who are working on your travel documents, are asking you to find the nearest Russian Consulate in your country and apply for the Russian visa. Could you also please send us a copy of your passport (the main page)? We will need it for the official invitation and for booking travel.

Девочки, снова за помощью иду. Снова стыдно. Уже записалась на курсы с четверга иду вспоминать англ.яз.

1) не могли бы Вы прислать несколько Ваших фото, например 3 или 4 шт. для публикации на сайте?

Could you please send us 3 or 4 fotos for publishing on web-site?

2) также для релиза мы должны согласовать текст о том, что именно вы будете делать на выставке.

We also have agree your activities during the exhibition

и еще несколько фраз перевела - посмотрите пожалуйста ошибки особенно заметные.

In 1983 graduated The University of San Francisco. Eric Joyner has many awards, he is in New York Society of Illustrators, since 1984 he is a member of the San Francisco Society of Illustrators ever and Spectrum award winner in Fantastic Art. Since 2000, he has had over 50 solo exhibits all over the world.

Eric is American artist and Illustrator working in the style of pop surrealism. In his tremendous paintings the artist conveys the world of the future and the present, the relationship between man and robot.
Special attention deserves the series with donuts, where each painting is interesting composition scene.
The robots look a bit funny and quite harmless: whimsical, thoughtful, sometimes tragic.
The presence of the same paintings favorite delicacy of donuts is highlighting positive stories.
At the exhibition our waiting for the presentation and the story of Eric about his work. For children there will be a master-class of painting robots.
На этом кажется все.

Главная ошибка we will may choose. Что Вы хотели сказать? Я помогу. В остальном все читабельно, они поймут