по англ подскажите плиз

Нужно составить небольшой рассказ про семью.
Верно ли составила дочка?

Hello! I'm Alice.I am 8 years old. Meet my family.This is my mom, her name is Alena. She is very nice and beautiful.This is my dad, Yuri. He's smart and big. My younger brother Arseny can swim and play. I like my family.