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Отредактируйте пожалуйста! Знаю что мой английский оставляет желать лучшего.
Dear son,
todai is 29th of August. You are 10 years old. Your hight is 145 cm.
You are very emotional, social and caring person. I hope you wшll divelope your talents and will continue playing piano. In June, when you read this letter, you can play some new music pieces.
I also hope in this school year you will find new friends. I know how worry you are about the relationships with your new teacher but I m sure you become friends at the end of the year.
You have a lot of interests. You play piano, tennis. You like reading and cinema. The last film that we have seen is @. Your latest hobbi is drowing mango faces. Can you do it now better?
You recently began to read newspapers. You are interested in world politic and can be comprehensible talker.
Your last achivement is ZIG ZAG waterside in Spain! Do you remember it?
The last your present fot my birthday was amazing. You bought fort my birthday beautiful flowers wit all your money you spent. .....
Вот что сочинила!
а зачем все это? сын по русски не умеет читать?
хотя так как там написано и по английски тоже сложно прочитать
Долго редактировать придется уж слишком "по-русски" написано :) впрочем, смысл понятен. Только ошибки исправьте, Microsoft Word вам в помощь.
Поправила, что нашла. Пусть еще кто-нибудь из американок посмотрит, наверняка что-то упустила.
Dear son,
Today is 29th of August. You are 10 years old. Your height is 145 cm.
You are very emotional, social and caring person. I hope you will improve your talents and continue to play piano. In June, when you read this letter, you can play some new music pieces.
I hope you will find new friends this school year. I know that you are worried about the relationships with your new teacher but I'm sure you two become friends by the end of the year.
You have a lot of interests. You play piano, tennis. You like reading and cinema. The last film that we have seen is @. Your last hobby is drawing mango faces. Can you do it better now?
You recently began to read newspapers. You are interested in world politics and can be comprehensible talker.
Your last achievement is ZIG ZAG waterside in Spain! Do you remember it?
Your present for my birthday was amazing. You bought beautiful flowers for all your money. .....
